Can anyone out there help me out?

<p>I'm an Asian, nt so gd in English.
I have written the rough copy for my uni application personal statement.
Is anyone out thr willing to read my essay, proofread it and perhaps give me some comments on how to make it better for an personal statement?</p>

<p>Help plz?</p>

<p>I don't mind. PM it.</p>

<p>Disclaimer: I'm an '09er</p>

<p>I'll take a look</p>

<p>help.....~ T_T</p>