Can anyone PLEASE read my Essay??

<p>I completely rewrote my common app essay and I would love some feedback on it. It's a tongue-in-cheek essay on my secret obsession...</p>

<p>I would be grateful to PM my essay to anyone!</p>

<p>I will read it:)</p>

<p>I’ll read it too! ^^</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it :)</p>

<p>Sure, pm me!</p>