<p>Can someone please review this essay, and give me some advice and tips about it? I'm really unsure about the way I wrote it, so I'd love some feedback! I don't feel completely comfortable just posting it online for anyone to see (or worse, plagiarize <em>gasps</em>), so just reply saying so, and I'll PM it to you. This essay is for U of Florida, and the prompt was: </p>
<p>"In the space provided, please write a concise narrative in which you describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and how it will affect your college experience or your contribution to the UF campus community. You may want to reflect on your ideas about student responsibility, academic integrity, campus citizenship or a call to service."</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
It might take a day or two to get back to you, though.</p>