Can anyone proofread my essay??

Colleges and Universities A-Z Yale University
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<p>For those who got in EA!
please help me out.</p>

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<p>I got deferred EA, but writing's what I'm best at. If you want me to take a look, pm me</p>

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<p>i can if you want, pm me</p>

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<p>BUMP</p>

<p>anyone, online right now?</p>