Can anyone proofread my personal statement?

<p>If anyone would like to help me out, i can pm you the statement. It is about 200 words. It is in early stages, im wondering if its a good subject, if it rambles, if it is effective, and if i should add/remove stuff from it. THank you very much.</p>

<p>sure i'd love to help</p>

<p>i wouldn't mind helpling, but if it is in its early stages I would suggest you PM it to me after completing the work. I hate to add my voice to your work so early. However, if you really want to sent it I'll be willing to help.</p>

<p>Only because your username contains a reference to Good Omens. PM it over.</p>