Can anyone read + help me with my college essay?

<p>I really need help with my common app essay and i need GENUINE help.
I need people who can offer me advice, point out grammatical mistakes, and change some parts of the essay to the way they think is the best fit.
Again, I need GENUINE help, not help from people who are merely interested what other people's essay is like or are planning to plagiarize.
Thank you!!</p>

<p>LOL, I definitely will not plagiarize your essay as I finished my undergrad and MBA years ago. If you like an adult’s opinion, feel free to PM me.</p>

<p>Ditto… graduated from Texas in 88, so no need to steal. Would be happy to help, if you want to PM me. :)</p>