Can anyone read my Common App Essay? Applying ED in a few days so I need feedback.

College Essays
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<p>Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.</p>

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<p>PM me :)</p>

<p>10char</p>

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<p>you can PM me</p>

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<p>PM me, sir or ma’am.</p>

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<p>I have edited it some more, if anyone else wants to give me some suggestions.</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll take a look.</p>

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<p>I’ll critique, PM it over</p>

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<p>I can help with flow and structure
if you PM</p>