Can anyone read my Common App essay please? :)

College Essays
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<p>Opinions? Revisions? Comments? Anything!</p>

<p>In my writing class it was required to write a college essay and so my teacher has already graded/read mine. She gave a 100 ... which isn't saying much since the last 3 papers I wrote I got all 100s on ... Haha. My 2-3 friends proofread mine too and gave good feedback, but I feel like it's missing something or needs more work. I need people ASAP since my earliest deadline is January 3rd.</p>

<p>Anyone willing to read it please?
:)</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

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<p>Hmmmmmm time for a bump?</p>

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<p>trade? PM me (:</p>

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<p>Woohoo! Okay :)</p>

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<p>i finished my commomapp essay and i’d like to read
PM me :)</p>

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<p>Sure, PM it over.</p>

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<p>I sent you mine, trade?</p>

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<p>trade?? PM me</p>

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<p>PM yours to me and I’ll send you mine.</p>

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<p>PM’d it to all of you :slight_smile:
Thanks!</p>

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<p>Trade ya :). PM me yours and I’ll send mine over.</p>

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<p>trade? i’ll pm you mine too :)</p>