Can anyone read my essay/activity short answer?

College Essays
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<p>Is there anyone out there willing to read either my Common App essay or my Common App Activity Short Answer?</p>

<p>The essay has already gone through extensive proofreading but I wanted someone who has never heard of the experience I am talking about read it. (It is a school event and I wanted to know if you had never heard of it, does the essay still make sense.) I also need to know if it shows enough of myself for a personal essay.</p>

<p>The activity short answer has not been proofread yet but I wanted to know if the tone and content is decent. </p>

<p>Can anyone help me with one or both of these?</p>

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<p>Can anyone help me out?</p>

<p>I also just wrote my supplement essay for UNC Chapel Hill. So if anyone can help me with that as well I would appreciate it. </p>

<p>You don’t need to help with all three, even reading one would be much appreciated </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>I would like to read your essays.</p>

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<p>I’d be more than happy to go over both of your essays. Just PM them to me.</p>

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<p>I would be happy to take a look at your essays.</p>

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<p>Thank you all so much! I will PM you the three essays but don’t feel the need to read them all.</p>

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<p>bump…</p>

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<p>I could help</p>

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<p>bump… I just did some editing on my essays, can anyone give these revisions a read?</p>

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<p>I would love to read the revisions! Just PM it over!</p>

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<p>I will read as well. If you could take a look at mine too I would greatly appreciate it.</p>

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<p>I can read it; send it to me.</p>

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<p>Thanks for everyone who said they could help! I’m DMing you the essays now</p>

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<p>I read them but cant send pm’s. if u wanna pm me ur email i can respond</p>