<p>I'm finally done with the rough draft of my first essay for U of I. I'd appreciate feedback/revisions. If you'd like to help me out, I'll pm you the essay? </p>
<p>Here's the prompt:
ESSAY #1: In an essay of 300 words or less, please describe how your past circumstances and experiences (such as your upbringing, community, and/or activities) impacted who you are, your future goals, and your choice of major. If you haven't decided on a college or major yet, briefly explain your intentions and aspirations for your first year at Illinois.</p>