It’s my first essay so I’m a little concerned it is not good enough. If anyone is willing to read it and give me some tips to improve it I would be thankful 
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PM me as well I would love to read it too!
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I will also read it for you, PM it to me If you want, I can send you one of mine if you want more ideas too.
PM me, I can read it.
PM me. I’d love to.