can anyone read my essay plz >.<

<p>yestoday i started on my first draft, so can anyone read it and give me some feedback? thanks!!</p>

<p>PM it to me.
or email me at: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a><a href="hint:%20i'm%20at%20my%20email%20more%20often">/email</a></p>

<p>PM me, I will be brutally honest with you</p>

<p>send it to mehh!
<a href="mailto:jyang1211@gmail.com">jyang1211@gmail.com</a></p>