Can anyone read my essay?

<p>Can anyone read my essay? This is the CommonApp one. And please don't post if you're not going to provide feedback. Thanks!</p>

<p>I guess I could look. I'm still writing mine, but I can probably make a few suggestions. PM it to me</p>

<p>i will read it pm me~</p>

<p>I will. PM me.</p>

<p>If you want another reader, I'll do it.</p>