<p>Common app essay about a person that I admire. My first college essay so please criticize with honest opinions. Is my topic too overused?</p>
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<p>i'll read it. pm me</p>
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<p>I can read it and give advice.</p>
<p>I certainly will</p>
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<p>ill read it</p>