<p>I'm looking for someone to read my essay. This is my very first one and the very first draft. :) It's pretty long, so I will definitely edit it (although I don't know how at this stage) later. I want to know what you think about the content and the style. It will be great if you can tell me what impression do you get about me from the essay and if there's anything I can do to make it better. Thanks in advance.</p>
<p>Anne</p>