Can anyone read my essays... I think it's good, others don't....

Applying to College
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<p>My dad, a writer/diplomat, is very good at writing but he's the type that's very simple and dismisses all the essays I write because he thinks they're all crap. Anyways, please someone prove me or he wrong....</p>

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<p>i'll give my opinion/feedback. just PM it to me</p>

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<p>my essays are out there too</p>

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<p>Sure, I'm in a generous mood since it's Xmas and all. PM me. :)</p>

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<p>PM me, i'll read it, yeah, even though it's christmas XP</p>

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<p>yeah email it to me, <a href="mailto:rightwing2706@yahoo.com">rightwing2706@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>Feel free to pm it to me. I don't know that I can offer any content feedback, but I can at least check for any mechanical errors.</p>

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<p>thanks dudes.</p>

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<p>Free your inbox, yo.</p>

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<p>PM me. I got 0 Wrong on writing PSAT - 80 biyotch!! haha there goes my ego again!</p>

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<p>My bad dude.</p>

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<p>...surely i will read pm me please.....</p>

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<p>still havent gotten it</p>

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<p>oops sorry your comment was kind of ambiguous..</p>

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<p>PM it to me i'll read it</p>

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<p>if you like u can PM to me
i warn you..i am violently honest - hope you dont cry like a girl out of sadness or like a married hobo out of joy!</p>

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<p>criticism is a good thing if you can reverse it.</p>

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<p>i'll take a look</p>