Can anyone read my UC 600 word essay?

College Essays
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<p>Will anyone look over it and give me some comments? preferably someone already in the UC system! Thanks</p>

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<p>i'd be happy to help you</p>

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<p>sure i'll read it too, just private message me</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>PM me</p>

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<p>i will read it</p>

<p>PM me plz..</p>

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<p>ill read it, pm me</p>

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<p>I saw your thread and would love to read your essay and give feedback...
PM me..</p>

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<p>i'll check it out.</p>

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<p>I will be glad to help you out! pm me!</p>