Can anyone read my UC essay #1?

<p>I'm not good at writing essays, so i will appreciate if anyone can help.
The prompt is:
Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

<p>Sure, I would take a look over it.
I can give you some solid critiques on your essay. Send it through PM on here.
Looking forward to read your personal statement! ;)</p>

<p>'09er, but I can critique.</p>

<p>sure pm it to me, i'll be glad to help</p>

<p>09er as well. If you like I can take a look.</p>

<p>I'd love to read it.
People tell me I provide good and honest commentary.
Email me at: <a href="mailto:confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com">confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>Sure. PM me.</p>

<p>if u don't mind I'm 09er, pm me.</p>

<p>pm me. i'll read it ;)</p>

<p>sure i would be happy to read it. PM me</p>

<p>I can read it =]</p>