can anyone read my uc essays?

Applying to College
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<p>^
they are my first drafts
i just dont know how i should approach the essays
can anyone read them and give me some guidance?
i'll pm probably today or tomorrow
i would appreciate if people who have witten excellent collge essays can read them. thanks</p>

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<p>sure i can take a look</p>

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<p>i will read them</p>

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<p>sure ill see. just pm me and i can give feedback</p>

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<p>PM me if u are still interested in a response.</p>

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<p>I'll read it! PM me.</p>

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<p>PM please!</p>

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<p>I will be happy to read your essay. I am majoring in english; thus, i can help you with the clarity of your essay, Anyways, Bona Fortuna :)</p>

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<p>thanks guys
im not at home right now so i'll pm you guys tomorrow night</p>

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<p>The essays don't matter for UCSD.</p>

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<p>i know la's somewhat reach for me, but im still gonna try :) so yea w/e im still gonna do my best</p>

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<p>pm them to me</p>

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<p>i would love to take a look....pm them to me...</p>

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<p>I will also partake in the reading of your essays. You can PM them to me, if you'd like.</p>

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<p>PM me as well..</p>

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<p>me too. i would be happy to take a look</p>

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<p>Me three. PM me.</p>

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<p>pm me too!</p>

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<p>PM me. I can tell you my first impression.</p>

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<p>PM me, I've read enough UC essays to understand if the writers convey what they need to the adcoms.</p>