Can anyone read over my Cornell supplement?

Applying to College
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<p>It's not too long (570 words <--will this be okay since the limit is 500?) and I'm planning on sending it in today. I just need someone to quickly look over it and offer feedback on grammar and content . It would be much appreciated! Fast(er) responses would be absolutely amazing, as I am sending it in very very very soon (AKA in a few hours).
Also, I may be a little choosy on who I send it to, just to be on the safe side >< It may not be all that good....BUT I REALLY WANT TO GET INTO CORNELL!</p>

<p>THANK YOU</p>

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<p>Haha I am actually working on the same supplement right now. I won’t offer to help, but I wish you luck and a free bump!</p>

<p>Also, if possible, I would scale it down to 500. I know that they don’t count, per say, but better to be on the safe side, no?</p>

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<p>Thank you very much :smiley: You too! I’ve tried…it started out at 640 words, but I feel like if I cut it down any more, it’ll lose both its meaning and voice. I’ll just cross my fingers they won’t count the words D:</p>

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<p>Thanks! Ah, don’t fret over it then. I’m sure it will all work out. :]</p>

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<p>Haha, hopefully xD Another good luck to you! Maybe we’ll be future classmates o: (wishful thinking >_>)</p>

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<p>That would be excellent! Haha While I doubt my own abilities, there is surely no harm in hoping.</p>

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<p>You can send it to me. I’m really familiar with Cornell (almost went there myself and have lots of family that went there) and not a competitor. If you’re applying to ILR, I had a really lengthy conversation with an admissions counselor who gave me some advice that I can pass on.</p>

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<p>Sent in my app! THANK YOU EVERYONEE! :smiley: Time to cross my fingers :[</p>