<p>I really need a critique before I submit the materials.</p>
<p>I’ll read them send me a message, could you read mine as well?</p>
<p>Sure. If you’re willing to return the favour by reading my essays I’d be happy to give you a fair critique on yours.</p>
<p>^Are you an SFS transfer?</p>
<p>I’ll read them as well if you would like.</p>
<p>@ FutureTransfer: Nope. I am applying to the College.</p>