Can anyone read over the intro to my Bates Essay?

College Essays
1

<p>It's short :)</p>

2

<p>i’d love to!</p>

3

<p>bump (10 char)</p>

4

<p>i said i would but you never pmed me…</p>

5

<p>i would be willing to read over. I’m '09, but not applying to Bates. nowhere near applying to bates.</p>

6

<p>Sure thing; former NESCAC student myself!</p>

7

<p>i’ll pm you all now.</p>