Can anyone review my UC essays??

Applying to College
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<p>hello~ i am not a good writer, but i wrote my UC essays.
Can anyone review my essay and provide me honest reply??</p>

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<p>I'll take a look. PM me.</p>

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<p>ill look at them if you look at mine later. PM me.</p>

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<p>i can help provide feedback if you want. Just PM me</p>

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<p>i'll take a look too</p>

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<p>i shall look homie dizzle fizzle.</p>

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<p>i can take a look, pm it to me</p>

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<p>I'll take a look. PM me too.</p>