<p>Can someone just take a look at my common app essay. I don't want to just leave it up on the internet, so if you tell me you'll look it over, I'll pm you. Be critical if need be. Thanks in advance.</p>
<p>Can someone just take a look at my common app essay. I don't want to just leave it up on the internet, so if you tell me you'll look it over, I'll pm you. Be critical if need be. Thanks in advance.</p>