<p>I chose 'the most significant experience' prompt on the Common app... </p>
<p>Could you give me some constructive criticisms?
What do I need to change?
Or Should I try another essay? </p>
<p>help will be appreciated (I will PM the essay)
thx in advance.</p>
<p>I'm a senior, too, but I'm good with grammar. If you feel comfortable sending it to me, I'd be happy to proof it. Oh, and I've already written mine, if that helps.</p>
<p>sure.... I'm a senior too...</p>
<p>Yeah sure! I'll read it and give input! My essays are already long done!</p>
<p>I'll take a look. PM me.</p>
<p>ill take a look also!</p>
<p>Thx. u guys. Anyone else?</p>
<p>anyone else? can anyone tell me the experience is "significant enough"?</p>
<p>PM me if you still need some proofing.</p>
<p>sure thing! PM it please!</p>
<p>pm it to me also, if u still need some advice, etc.</p>
<p>I will take a look. PM me</p>
<p>I'll give it a look.</p>
<p>ill take a look</p>