Can I get some feedback on my short answer for Tufts?

College Essays
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<p>I'll PM it to anyone who's interested. Mostly, I just want to know if my rambling style is overwhelming. </p>

<p>Prompt:
Self-identity and personal expression take many forms. For example, music, clothing, politics, extracurricular interests, and ethnicity can each be a defining attribute. Do you surf or tinker? Are you a vegetarian poet who loves Ayn Rand? Do you prefer YouTube or test tubes? Are you preppie or Goth? Use the richness of your life to give us insight: what voice will you add to the Class of 2014? </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look if you want. I actually wrote up an essay for that prompt, but was accepted somewhere else ED, so I didn’t even get to use it! </p>

<p>Anyways, send me an email: <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>I just sent it to you, and congrats on WUSTL!</p>