Can I get some feedback on my UC essay please? =]

College Essays
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<p>Hey everyone,</p>

<p>I need someone to give me feedback on one of my UC essays. I'm applying to all UCs except Merced and Riverside, with a hopeful destination of Berkeley. Thank you in advance!</p>

<p>-Travis</p>

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<p>anyone? I would really appreciate it.</p>

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<p>I will but I’m applying to Berkeley too. I can send you mine if you send yours though :)</p>

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<p>I will read both of your essays, just PM me.</p>

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<p>Sure I’d be happy to give yours a read-over and send back some critique.
E-mail me at <a href=“mailto:NKunkel@ucsd.edu”>NKunkel@ucsd.edu</a> or PM me.</p>

<p>Best of luck with Cal</p>

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<p>i’ll read your UC essays… PM me :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, PM me :)!</p>