<p>Hello, I need someone to edit this essay because my bad grammar makes the essay sound bad. I think It has some potential in the hands of a good editor so please help me, I would really appreciate this. Leave your email address and I will email it to you and please let me know what you thought of it and how should I change it. Thank you.</p>
<p>Please you guys I need to turn this in to colleges soon and don’t now what else to change in the essay could someone please edit it for me?</p>