<p>If you have just written your essay I will proof it for you if you'd like, however, </p>
<p>what I'm really looking for is for people to simply let me read their successful essays, or essays they have already written and had proof read so I can obtain an idea of how an essay, for the common app, should flow and feel before I delve into writing my own. </p>
<p>thanks a lot :D</p>
<p>I feel I should probably cancel this request, </p>
<p>I don’t want to be viewed as someone out to make myself look better by plagiarizing the ideas of others, and I realize this request might seem to do so, </p>
<p>so sorry for that.</p>
<p>look at the fiske guide, it has like 107 successful essays or something like (a few i especially liked)
you can read mine if you want, but they’re still a process in the making</p>