Can I tell a story?

College Essays
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<p>So I am doing to CommonApp writing section and i'm hard pressed to write something stunning, original, and me. I wrote a "story" sort of a descriptive scene for my AP Lang class, and I really like it. It doesn't tell much about me, but it does show my writing style. I tweaked it a bit and am wondering if it is appropriate, and for the schools im sending it to, there are also supplement essays... </p>

<p>Will someone please read it and give me some feedback?</p>

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<p>A 500-word description of a scene probably won't work. It should be a personal essay.</p>

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<p>well its in first person, and the story happened to me. its just a sort of peaceful story...</p>

<p>anyone want to read it?</p>

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<p>Sure I'll read it and tell ya what I think.</p>

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<p>thanks! i pm'd it to you.</p>