I guess I will copy the format from the previous post.
Accepted: WashU, Boston College, UCLA, Northeastern
Waitlisted: Rice, George Town,
Rejected: Duke, Stanford, Yale, MIT, Princeton, Johns Hopkins, Caltech, Brown (Dream school…Only one in my family that didn’t get accepted to Brown)
Major: Computer Science
OBJECTIVE:
ACT: 34 (Superscore:36)
ACT Writing: 9
UW GPA: 3.81
W GPA: My school doesn’t offer a weighted GPA
AP: USH(4), European History(5), AP Biology(4), Calculas AB(3), AP Lit(4)., Psychology(4), Gov(4)., Art History (Didn’t Take Test)
Senior Year: HL2 English Literature, HL2 European History, HL2 Biology, SL Economics, Further Math
Junior Year: SL French, AP Calc., HL1 English Lit., HL1 European History, HL1 Biology,
Sophomore Year: APUSH, IB Financial Lit., Pre-Calculas, H-English 10, H-Chemistry
Major Awards: National Merit Scholarship semifinalists, 2nd State 200 free, Silver and Blue LD 3rd Place, As well as other debate awards, IB Diploma.
SUBJECTIVE:
Extracurriculars:
TSA
Key Club
Operation Smile
Community of Caring
MESA
DECA
Debate
NHS
Sports: Lacrosse, Tennis, Track and Field, Swim
Job/Work Experience: Five Guys–> 15 Hours/Week
Volunteer/Community service:
Volunteers @ Childrens Hospital
American Red Cross
(My States Name) Food Bank
Boys and Girls Club
Essays: Talked about living in china, as a Caucasian male. Impact of my mothers death on my life. Many different topics actually, not really going to list them all…
Teacher Recommendation: From Biology + IB Director @ my school.
Counselor Rec: Yep
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?:Yes but didn’t qualify.
State: ####
School Type: Public; #1 Public In State
Ethnicity: Cacuasian
Gender: Male
Income Bracket: $150-200,000
Hooks: Parent graduated from Brown; from the southwest
Notes: Overall, I believed what lowered my chances of being accepted is the fact that my application essays were not that great. I procrastinated a lot when It came to deadlines, over all my senior year was pretty bad. I started slacking off in the 3rd term and my grades are suffering right now, kinda lost motivation after I got accepted.