Can some please look over my college essay? por favore?

College Essays
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<p>Who should i send it to?</p>

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<p>I strongly urge you to NOT put your essay out on the internet publicly. I suggest you edit your post now and remove the essay or anyone can steal it.</p>

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<p>Hey thanks!</p>

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Uh, if anyone wanted to “steal” it, all they’d have to do is ask her to PM it to them. I fail to see how posting it here is any more dangerous than sending it via PM.</p>

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<p>okay great, so are you guys saying that i shouldnt ask for essay help on this site?</p>

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<p>So lets get back on topic- who wants a read?</p>

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<p>I’d care to read it…</p>