Can somebody look over/ peer edit my essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hi my essay is a little different and was just looking for a few readers to give me a bit of advice</p>

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<p>anybody lol</p>

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<p>Send it on over</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>i will!
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<p>I’ll read it also.</p>

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<p>send it on over!</p>

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<p>I’ll read if youre still looking for feedback</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, if you still need more readers. I’ll tweek it a bit for you/critique it a bit.</p>

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<p>THANK YOU GUYS ALOT!!! i will pm asap probably tomorrow lol right now ive got a test to study for</p>