<p>i need some feedback, to make sure it sounds okay and if you could please suggest any improvements you think would make it sound better
i'm applying for engineering honors at UT.
i'll message you the essay if you want to read it
thanks!</p>
<p>engineering? well, my tablemate wants to study this…yet I am interested in international politics…even people suggets me not to do that as an Chinese…well…what ever, PM me if you want any suggestions from me>></p>