can somebody read my essay and give me some advice?

<p>I think it really sucks, but i've spent too much time on this stupid essay to go back now. anybody want to read it and give me serious advice?</p>

<p>i’ll try to help. james</p>

<p>i’ll try to help as well. PM me.</p>

<p>thank’s cee for reading it…anybody else? i just got told it really sucked, lol. i’m getting mixed reviews.</p>

<p>I’ll read it if you’d like, pm me</p>