Can somebody read my essay and help me

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<p>So I have an essay in which I need help on. I have revised the whole essay and stuff, but for some reason I feel like I can improve it. Would any of you people mind reading it, and possibly give your thoughts or fix the tedious issues?</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>let me know and I will PM you the essay</p>

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<p>^ Try shooting a PM to anyone of those people.</p>

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<p>Sure(: And hey, if you send me your email address, chances are I can get back to you a lot faster… The CC app on my ipod has been acting up lately.</p>

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<p>hey EliKresses check your inbox in 2 min</p>

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<p>where is your essay?</p>

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