Can somebody read my Johns Hopkins Supplement???

College Essays
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<p>Hiii happy holidays! upsettingly, i cant enjoy my break that much with so many supplementals to edit/finish. I just finished my hopkins supp. (still have to remove 20ish words) I was wonder if someone could critique it? I will read your essays if you would like. Thanks so much!</p>

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<p>I will! Can you read mine?</p>

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<p>yup I will :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>