Can somebody read my Swarthmore essay?

<p>Anybody's willing to read?</p>

<p>It's 700 words. I'm quite confused whether it's too much for a Why essay.</p>

<p>Thanks for your help :)</p>

<p>you can send it in a private msg if you wish</p>

<p>i would love to! PM me, please!</p>

<p>I will be glad to help, e-mail me.
<a href="mailto:edwardxedward@yahoo.com">edwardxedward@yahoo.com</a></p>