I feel pretty good about my essay, so I am having trouble seeing what needs to be edited. A fresh set of brutally honest (But constructive!) eyes would be greatly appreciated, thank you!
Happy to help, just pm me.
Let me have a read too. PM me too.
I can help out
I am known to brutally rip apart essays. I’d love to do so to yours. 
You called my name!!! PM me!!!
Sure, if you still need more feedback
yes i will be super honest pm me