<p>Im applying to some of the nation's best universities, and I really need to make sure that this essay is really good..</p>
<p>Would anyone like to take a look at it? This is probably my 4th draft lol...</p>
<p>ill pm it to you!</p>
<p>i’ll give it a read. pm me</p>
<p>Send it over! I’ll take a look!</p>
<p>If you would do the same for me!</p>
<p>thanks guys! anyone else??</p>
<p>Pm me. Ill give you some feedback</p>
<p>I need mine looked at too. I posted it, then was told that it wasn’t so smart. What is PM to someone and how can I get some to look over mine, it’s been years since I have written one!</p>
<p>Great I have figured it out, but because I don’t have 15 posts I cannot pm. Help! This essay is due Wednesday.</p>
<p>Eh, I can give it a critique if you like. :)</p>
<p>Pm me, Ill give it a look.</p>
<p>thank you! im basically scared that im sounding really boring and that my ending is too cliche</p>