Can someone critique a 150 word "Why Duke?" Essay?

<p>Any volunteers?</p>

<p>Preferably students who have already applied or are already in college.</p>

<p>Please be as critical as possible.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>Sorry for the short post; I was in a hurry. I have SO many reasons why I would LOVE to go to Duke, but I’m not sure how well I condensed these reasons into one short essay.</p>

<p>Can anyone help me with this?</p>

<p>Thank you so much.</p>

<p>I’ll read it right away if you send it soon</p>

<p>I’ll read it !</p>

<p>i’d like to read it.</p>

<p>I will read!</p>

<p>PM if you want!</p>

<p>i’m a little late, but I’d read it too</p>