Can Someone critique my commonapp essay?

<p>Be as harsh as possible. Just reply and i will send you a PM</p>

<p>You can PM me if you want. :slight_smile: I’m also applying this year (trying to get essays done…)</p>

<p>bump… anyone else …please?</p>

<p>sure, pm me.</p>

<p>sure pm me too</p>

<p>Okay, me three.</p>