<p>if anyone could read my essay and give there opinion I'd appreciate it. let me know and ill pm you</p>
<p>Happy to help.</p>
<p>Well, I personally wouldn’t send it to @MrMike7 over there… Send your essays only to credible members. Under most circumstances, those who have 3-4 posts are certainly not people you should seek help from. That said, I could take a look if you wish. Good luck.</p>