Can someone critique my essays? UC 2x200

College Essays
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<p>Post here and I'll PM it to you.</p>

2

<p>ill look at it.. dont you have school?</p>

3

<p>I'm on "break".</p>

4

<p>i'll have a look in it</p>

5

<p>ill read it.</p>

6

<p>i'll read it too</p>

7

<p>I'll give my two cents. =P</p>

8

<p>i'll critique it i guess</p>

9

<p>my aunt worked in admissions a couple years ago. even though she never really read statements, she has a really good idea of whats good and whats not. i can read it and then ask her about it and give you some input.</p>

10

<p>pm me...i'll take a look</p>

11

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>PM me</p>

12

<p>I'll read it, feel free to message it to me</p>

13

<p>i'll read it too</p>

14

<p>pm me i'll read it</p>

15

<p>sure send it over</p>

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<p>I'd love to read it, but it appears you already have over a dozen critiquers. if you don't mind however, sure, I'd like to read and comment back.</p>