Can someone critique my Penn supplement essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Pennsylvania
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Hi can anyone of you critique the first draft of my Penn supplement essay?

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Yeah I can! Would you PM it to me?

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I will!

4

I can take a look. PM it?

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I will!

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I can, you can pm me!

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PM me as well!

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I can take a look as well!

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I don’t mind either! Feel free to PM me :slight_smile:

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If you still need help, I’ll be glad to offer whatever I can.

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Same here. If you need help let me know.