Can someone critique my transfer essays?

<p>I really need someone to critique my essays before I send them in! Anyone? Thanks!</p>

<p>sure pm me</p>

<p>sure pm me too :)</p>

<p>surre i will</p>

<p>Can someone help me? My essay is too long to post in your PMs!</p>

<p>Will you provide your IM names?</p>

<p>you can email me, <a href="mailto:simoncheong0188@yahoo.com">simoncheong0188@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>I will, PM me</p>

<p>You can PM me too</p>