can someone critque my essay?

[eleven11]

<p>I just got the essay for the common app done.
pm me plz!</p>

[LAPeru]

<p>I will...send it to me</p>

[sonic_pwr]

<p>sure :) send it</p>

[marite]

<p>You can send it to me, too.</p>

[airforcegb]

<p>I’ll try~ <a href=“mailto:zlkv9@mail.missouri.edu”>zlkv9@mail.missouri.edu</a></p>