Can someone critque my SOP

<p>I don't have words to appreciate how thankful I am if someone can critique my SOP. I need grammar/punctuation check and overall thoughts from experienced, educated people in this forum. Just post a reply and I'll PM it to you. Thank you so so much.</p>

<p>nobody:(</p>

<p>Hey, I’ll look at yours if you look at my scholarship application.
FWIW, I was just accepted at Georgetown University for a grad program, so apparently they liked something about my SOP :stuck_out_tongue: </p>

<p>I will. Just send it to me and should I PM mine to you?</p>

<p>This is due tomorrow. Can anybody help:(</p>