Can someone grade my essay please? SAT

<p>I'm from Paraguay and an spanish native speaker, but I'm trying to do my best to write a great essay.</p>

<p>ASSIGMENT: IS THERE ALWAYS ANOTHER EXPLANATION OR ANOTHER POINT OF VIEW?</p>

<p>Even though we sometimes believe we have the correct answer of something, there is always another point of view for everything. The Jewish and the Catholics are different in the way they think of God and people tend to see colors differently from others. No matter how hard we try, people will always have different thoghts that ours.</p>

<p>Jewish people believe in God as their unique saviour. They believe he would save the humanity from the bad if they are obidient to God. Catholics believe in the same thing, but there is a point that both religions will argue about. Jewish say that Jesus Christ did not come to the world, and they are waiting for him to come. However, catholics say that Jesus Christ already came to the world and died in the cross to save the humanity. Here we have a clear example of two different points of view. Even if catholics try with all their strenght to change Jewish's mind, they will fail trying and the same will happen if the Jewish try to change the catholic's mind.</p>

<p>Last month I went to a party with my best friend, and there was a girl dressed with a water green (from my point of view) dress. My friend showed me how beautiful that light blue (from her point of view) dress was. I told her that it was water green, but she totally desagree, she said it was light blue. We started discussing for 20 minutes about that and non of us got to an agreement. I noticed that even in colors people can have their own point of view and they will not change that thought.</p>

<p>It is very clear that in the entire world there are more than hundred points of view of what we strongly believe it is true. As the Jewish and the catholic, or my point of view of one color that was different from my friend's point of view, we will always come across situations were our thoughts or our interpretation about something will be different from others. We just need to accept and take the good from every opinion. </p>

<p>WHERE OUR thoughts*</p>

<p>The colors thing is a pretty silly example. </p>

<p>There’s an SAT Prep forum - you’ll do better if you post it there</p>

<p>Ok, thank you bodangles for ur opinion!! :)</p>

<p>Thank u CHD2013 :)</p>