Can someone help me by reading my Brown supplements

I am working on my Brown supplements and I am wondering if someone can read some of them. Only adults or college students, please.

I didn’t really want a service. I just wanted someone with experience to read my essay. With supplements it’s just so hard to tell if your essay is good or not.

I will read them if you want. Not applying to Brown and I’ve submitted my college apps already.

I can read if youre desperate for a reader. Full disclosure I’m also a senior but not applying to Brown

I already found a reader, but thanks for the offer. I do have a question though, if you can answer it.

One of the prompts for the Brown supplement is: Why are you drawn to the area(s) of study you indicated earlier in this application? If you are “undecided” or not sure which Brown concentrations match your interests, consider describing more generally the academic topics or modes of thought that engage you currently. (150 word limit)

I wrote my answer about the major itself, but should I add something about how an education in this major will help me in the future or just leave it as is (just about why I want to major in __).

I am open to reading it, if you need any more advice.

I’d say either is fine. I’d say the most important thing is how you approach it. With my other schools that asked that question I personally talked about my past and how I’m in love with computers for computer science. I don’t think you can go wrong with it.